Big trouble in little india

[Hardaway1818]

Mesmerizing. More more more, we want more!

haha thanks TS bro for the fantastic read

[altosaxophone]

Constantly refreshing to see if theres any updates haha keep it up ilock!

[ilikeoldchangke]

Originally Posted by zhot

Seriously TS. Every story you wrote is better than the last 1. Whenever I think the story is too awesome and no way you are able to another story better, you ALWAYS proof me wrong. Not complaining thou.

Thank you TS for all your time and effort.

PS. I have already purchased a few stories from you. All worth it.

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Thank you for the compliment & support.

[ilikeoldchangke]

Thank you all for reading my work and the kind words of support and encouragement.

There are a few more updates left before we wrap this up.

Check back next week for update.

I'm still editing the main fight scene.


Enjoy the long weekend.


Cheers


James

[darkn1ght]

Wah very well written. Got me hooked.

[Phython1]

Could not stop the refreshing of the page to gain more into the story!

Simply amazing to read in!

[YellowEarth]

Keep it coming TS. So excited reading this awesome story!

[spectreray]

Originally Posted by ilikeoldchangke

Thank you all for reading my work and the kind words of support and encouragement.

There are a few more updates left before we wrap this up.

Check back next week for update.

I'm still editing the main fight scene.


Enjoy the long weekend.


Cheers


James

Thank u bro for the update.... Will be waiting for next week

[sennheiser]

Bro, will we see Jane tell her side of the story? How she got from when Eddy picked her up till the point she met Jeff?

I'm curious as to how she helped the the pawnshop towkay and in the process buried 14 bodies under its foundation.

[diputs1269]

Originally Posted by darkn1ght

Wah very well written. Got me hooked.

Yes but too bad ending soon

[basfreak]

nice story TS, shall wait for more updates.

[decepticon73]

Can’t wait for the next

[Brobojio]

Now we finally know why there was a riot in Little India! Bro ilock, that is a stroke of genius! That’s story telling!

[andythai]

Thanks bro for sharing your script here, appreciate that pal

[Funerei86]

To the undisputed best writer on SBF,
Thanks for another masterpiece!!
We are all looking forward to Owen’s downfall at Little India

Was laughing like mad when I read these part

Xuehua ask Jeff
“Whose heels are these?”

I look at the photo, back to Xuehua and then the massive cleaver she was holding